For Friday Fictioneers – May 3, 2013
Wobbling within our habitation – wandering and confused, almost wondering why, but still composing, constructing, rearranging and conceiving it again in different light at different angles in differing times from different points of view, almost like a structure or a form foaming out of content like both sides of a two-way mirror – what we’ve made of what we’re made of – making tremendous spackled multi-entried exits and shifting permeable boundaries – you push, I push, we pull – it changes – look again and reconsider, same as considering anew or forever beginning while still it’s taking shape, working it over even when we’re not working – not really – detail upon detail after detail ever only under one single purpose – to be functional.
N Filbert 2013
not even lip service to the aesthetic ?
🙂
write it as i hear it
🙂 – always enjoy reading these
i looked and felt “wobbling” and the neurons & molecules took care of the rest, however, now that you’ve mentioned it, the fact that the aesthetic has hung on so long must indicate significant function for us methinks
perhaps a distant echo of the divine ?
Your words felt like they *were* the building. Oddly entrancing…
very kind, thank you
Certainly a fitting description of this building… as dynamic as this structure pushes and pulls.
I like your “comment quote”. I really like your style of writing. It’s unexpected and complex yet clearly written. 😀
This has a trance like feel to it.
At times it seems it’s about the building, then it seems it’s about the dwellers, then it seems it’s about relations in general.
Very nice take on the prompt, something that can be read over and over again.
That is a wonderful representation of the hurdles and hoops of one’s mental life as we pursue our beginnings and our ends, and all else in-between. Gaudi’s unusual/unorthodox structure certainly lends itself to such representation. A very interesting take; I thoroughly enjoyed. 🙂
thank you very much
thanks for taking the time to say so
great rhythm.
You’ve done it again! I loved ‘what we’ve made of what we’re made of’ especially. Great stuff. Not sure I could handle more than 100 words at a time though!
thank you – it probably is good that there is a constraint 🙂
I always enjoy your words, exquisite alliterations, rythm… if divided in shorter lines it’s called poetry. and that twist at the end… functional — pfftt
thank you Bjorn
I enjoy these and they make me think, but I also enjoy the stories you write.
janet
thank you
“Both sides of a two-way mirror”…interesting concept since only one person can see in. Nice writing.
Shalom,
Rochelle
thank you Rochelle