knee-jerk response trying to coax the writing machine within, thanks Rochelle Wisoff-Fields and Friday Fictioneers community
I was never good with numbers.
I meant, I intended, I felt the pressing need to say, to clarify. But I was never good with numbers. At least to specify, remonstrate, apologize, perhaps even to confess. Certainly profess, express remorse, plead a little, cry. I wanted you to know. So many things. How you struck me, thudded through, infiltrated, saturated, overwhelmed. How I craved and believed. What I dreamt.
But I was never good with numbers.
the progression of synonyms are a nice touch.
thank you
Words would have worked. 🙂
janet
This ‘prompts’ me to want to give the guy a pen and paper and hang it round his neck so he could write her number down so he could make that call, so he could …
🙂
yep
Dear N,
Sounds like he isn’t particularly good at communication either. However the author is.
Shalom,
Rochelle
MEN!
very kind. thank you Rochelle
ha, with numbers there’s always an excuse…
As a knee jerk response, this is very good.