Temporality: or, “in your absence I dwindle, I diminish…’I’ disappears”

for Hallie

(please read in pace with tune below)

absence

I.

Feel.

Profoundly.

Meaning

(less).

2 thoughts on “Temporality: or, “in your absence I dwindle, I diminish…’I’ disappears”

  1. a tad dramatic, but i love the arrangement/punctuation of lines. feels like one of the best combinations of words (expressive) i’ve ever pulled off. I was wrong though, it’s not meaning…less, more like unimportant/insignificant.

"A word is a bridge thrown between myself and an other - a territory shared by both" - M. Bakhtin